Friday, February 4, 2011

Mental Suicide

Here I stand on a lonely cliff

looking down upon the waves

crashing onto heavy boulders

in this cold evening

all alone by myself.

My heart like the eve

chilled to the very depth

just an emotion,that rushes like the waves-

loneliness and nothing more.

But now I flashback to the past

my memories speak to my heart,

they bear upon and weigh me down

the thoughts of a loving family.

I take a step more back

away from the hands of darkness,

the mind a swirl of thoughts

of love that I never returned,

decisions taken wrong:of mental suicide.


[This is my first poem.This was from where I started learning to walk through the lines.]

2 comments:

  1. this was yur first one? Woooaaa!! My first one was in 7th std... Oh lord,,, I roll over the floor and laugh till i have tears in my eyes when i see that 2day :P

    "my memories speak to my heart,

    they bear upon and weigh me down"

    beautiful lines!!

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  2. Thanks.I wrote this after I came to Ivanios.

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